Sunday, January 27, 2008

Memorable Event


My memorable event is an anecdote too.Its happened last winter , it was my last hockey game. We had nerver won a game against a certain team. We really hate to played against this team. Wherever we went , they were always there. One day we went to Montreal in tournament and we lost against this team in final. So , we didn't like this team. At our last game , both wanted to win because it was our last time against each other. There was so many people at the game and someone was recording our game. We were working so hard for won this game. It was 3-3 and two minutes to do at the third period. I was on the ice and a girl of my team shot the puck to the goal but the goalie stop it. I was in front of the goal and the puck returned in my skate , and I was so excited , so I pushed the puck in the goal with my skate. The goal didn't count because we can't make this. Whole my team were laughing at me. They said : 'we probably win if you take your stick!!!' Some of them remind me this event sometimes.

2 comments:

susan said...

That's so sad, Vanessa!!!
This is a funny and exciting story. I can picture the excitement in the arena.
Check these points in your text:
- Had never _______(win, won, won)
- Don't use VERY + verb ( very hate x REALLY + verb = really hate

- Check your text for the past tense.

yannick said...

Hi van!
You're story is so funny hahaha !!!:P
I'm not laugthing at you but with you ...:P
You're so good to write.
You're blog is so nice...